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Would you mind helping me with the grammar mistakes ? Plz . This is a self-introduction Good morning Amy.

My name is hanmeimei

As far as I can understand from the JD, this job requires the candidate should be Familiar with new media operations channels and skills. Such as produce content, Channel promotion, data analysis, optimization result.

And my job responsibility is taking charge of new media which includes 4 parts The first part is customer research,try to figure out customer’s gender, age, preferences and etc. The second part is responsible for social media (Wechat, Weibo) and operation output. The third part is Manage advertising suppliers.

This is all what I'm currently doing and I guess it should be in line with what you require. I was wondering, could you be more specific about what this job will be requiring?[emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji]

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Would you mind helping me with the grammar mistakes ? Plz . This is a self-introduction

It is unclear what this is.  Are you writing to someone to ask about a future job?  (first paragraph) And describing your current job (second paragraph)?  If this is the case, the format you need to take for such a letter is the following:

I am interested in (what job).  I believe that I have the qualifications for this job.

In my current position.....

Then you need to tie together how the skills and experience you have NOW will help you do a good job.  

Then you close the letter by saying that you would be happy to meet with (person) to discuss how you would be a good fit for this position, and then tell the person how to contact you and when you are available. 

Asking the specifics requirements of the job, beyond what the job description has, should not be in an initial letter.  That would come up in an interview. 


If you are writing to a "head hunter' that is, a person who works for a company that finds employees for other companies, then you would just ask about the job and not give the person any details about your current situation.  You would just say -- I saw the job posting for (job) and would like some more information.  I see that it requires x, y, and z.  And then ask your specific questions about things that are not included in the posting (is it a full-time position?  does it require travel? etc)

Good morning Amy.

My name is hanmeimei

As far as I can understand from the job description, this job requires the candidate to be familiar with new media operations, channels and skills such as product content, channel promotions,  data analysis, and optimization result.

In my current job, I am responsible for new media.  I work in four main areas:  customer research, for example, trying to figure out customer’s gender, age, preferences etc;  social media (Wechat, Weibo) and operation output; and managing advertising suppliers.

This is all what I'm currently doing and I guess it should be in line with what you require. I was wondering, could you be more specific about what this job will require?

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Would you mind helping me with the grammar mistakes ? Plz . This is a self-introduction

Good morning Amy.

My name is Hanmeimei

As far as I can understand from the JD, this job requires the candidate should be familiar with new media operations channels and skills such as product content, Channel promotion, data analysis, and optimization result.

And my job responsibility is taking charge of new media which includes 4 parts. The first part is customer researc. Try to figure out customer’s gender, age, preferences and etc. The second part is responsible for social media (Wechat, Weibo) and operation output. The third part is Manage advertising suppliers.

This is all what I'm currently doing and I guess it should be hope in line with what you require. I was wondering, could you be more specific about what this job will be requiring?[emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji]

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