First notebook entry: Introducing myself
i am winnie,come from guangzhou,guangdong province in china ! sometime i think that i am a outgoing girl,but i always behave so quite in the strange condition.i need more time get used to new condition and make friend with stranger.if we be close,you would feel that i am very friendly and conversable ! i will graduate in the college soon,and then i don't have a job.so i want to improve my english before i find a job. i love english! English is the global language which is useful for our life!
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Wow, my friend, you did a good job to write down this essay. I suggest you to write something here everyday, and then your English will be improved dramaticly! Come on!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am winnie, I come from Guangzhou, Guangdong province in China! Sometimes I think that I am a outgoing girl, but I always behave so quiet in the strange condition. I need more time get used to new condition and make a friendship with a stranger. If we be close, you would feel that I am very friendly and conversable! I will graduate in the college soon, and then I don't have a job.so i want to improve my english before I find a job. I love english! English is the global language which is useful for our life!Always use capital letters to Countries, States, Provinces and Cities. Always use capital letter for the 1st person pronoun I. Always use capital letters after periods.
Good luck to improve your English.
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