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Hellow my name is Hirotaro Kubo and today I'd like to talk about Alexander Graham Bell.Background
Bell and his work to create phone.
In 1876, Bell invented the phone. Actually, the phone was not made for the purpose of sending voice messages over distances. It was made in the middle of improving the telegraph technology. At that time,scientists couldn't convert the weak voice energy to electronic
signals by previous telegraph technology. (Also, they couldn't send strength of voice though
they could send tone of voice.?)
Research Question
Can we transmit voice energy by improved telegraphy to practical useful and strong electronic information?
Methods and Data
In 1876, Bell invented a phone.
1 Elisha Gray discovered the fact that sounds occurred when tracing electromagnet by
hand. He collaborated with Bell.
2 Bell succeeded to convert the voice wave received from vibration plate to vibration by
electromagnet and generate voice from vibration plate.
3 Bell said to assistant Watson "Mr. Watson ! Come here, I want to see you." And Watson
heard it in the room next door.
Conclusions and Future Research
Bell's work was a tremendous success. Now telecommunication business is exciting
thanks to this invention. Bell's work enables us to communicate with people over great distances.
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Hello my name is Hirotaro Kubo, and today I'd like to talk about Alexander Graham Bell.Background:
Bell and his work to create a phone.
In 1876, Bell invented a phone. Actually, the phone was not made for the purpose of sending voice messages to places that were far away, the phone was made in the middle of improving the telegraph technology. At that time, scientists couldn't convert the weak voice energy to electronic signal by previous telegraph technology. Also, they couldn't send strength of voice, though they could send the tone of voice.
Research Question:
Can we transmit the voice energy by improved telegraph to practical useful and strong electronic information?
Methods and Data:
In 1876, Bell invented a phone.
1) Elisha Gray discovered the fact that sounds occurred when tracing electromagnet by hand. He is a cooperator with Bell.
2) Bell succeeded to convert the voice wave received from vibration plate to vibration by electromagnet and generate voice from vibration plate.
3) Bell said to assistant Watson, "Mr. Watson, come here, I want to see you." and Watson heard it in the room next door.
Conclusions and Future Research:
Bell's work was a tremendous success. Now telecommunication business is exciting thanks to this invention. Bell's work has enabled us to communicate with people living far distances.
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