Mahire's notebook entry: May 30, 2011
The Footprint
by Abdurehim Otkur (Uyghur)
We started our journey which was too tough as we young,
Now grandsons grown up, war horses can be ridden on
We were too few; journey was hard at the very beginning,
Foot marks left on deserts, we’re now named a caravan
Cross the desert, cover the tops, leaving footprints behind,
Many left unburied there, they were the men of the men
Though unburied in open field with the bright red tamarisk,
Flowery graves will be made in a spring by freedom fan
Footprints left, destiny left, all of them left in the past,
Either it winds or sand moves, won’t erase them, never can
The caravan keeps going, though the horses week and hurt,
The footprints will be followed by grandsons or the great ones !
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Mahire's notebook entry: May 30, 2011
The Footprintby Abdurehim Otkur (Uyghur)
We started our journey which was too tough as we young,
Now our grandsons have grown up, war horses can be ridden upon
We were too few; the journey was hard at the very beginning,
Footprints
Cross the desert, cover the tops, leaving footprints behind,
Many were left unburied there, they were the men of the men
Though unburied in open field with the bright red tamarisk,
Flowery graves will be made in a spring by the freedom fan
Footprints left, destiny left, all of them left in the past,
No matter how the wind blows
The caravan keeps going, though the horses are weak
The footprints will be followed by grandsons of the great ones !
Very good, it is difficult to translate poetry of course, it has to flow as well as make sense, and many of the changes I marked probably disrupt the flow :(. Well done!
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This is really good. Can you post the original Uyghur as well?
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