About Tsunoshima( Sightseeing Spot)
Japan is consist of the four islands mainly and the most largest island is called Honshu. The westmost part of Honshu is Yamaguchi Prefecture where Abe Shinzo who is Japanese prime minister right now was born.Today, I'd like to introduce Tsunoshima and there is located in the westmost part of Yamaguchi Prefecture. Tsunoshima that is island and is surrounded by beautiful sea but the high popular reason is not only what it is. Probably, the reason is that there is straight and long bridge which is between Honshu and Tunoshima. Tsunoshima becomes the famous sightseeing spot because there is gotten attention as advertisement of the car. I have been to there more three times. I will introduce the most famous sightseeing spot for foreigners in Yamaguchi Prefecture next time.
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About Tsunoshima (Sightseeing Spot)
Japan is consists mainly of the four islands, mainly and the most largest island is called Honshu. The western-most part of Honshu is Yamaguchi Prefecture, where Abe Shinzo, who is the Japanese prime minister right now, was born.Today, I'd like to introduce Tsunoshima, and there which is located in the western-most part of Yamaguchi Prefecture. Tsunoshima that is an island and is surrounded by a beautiful sea but the high popular reason is not only what it is that is not the only reason it is so popular. Probably, the reason is that there is a straight and long bridge which is between Honshu and Tunoshima. Tsunoshima Bridge has becomes the a famous sightseeing spot because there is it has gotten attention as a location for car advertisements. I have been to there more three times. I will introduce the most famous sightseeing spot for foreigners in Yamaguchi Prefecture next time.Just some extra notes - to add emphasis about the bridge (you are not just talking about any bridge, but the famous Tsunoshima Bridge), I might say something more like:
(starting with the sentence that says "Probably, the reason is..."):
"The biggest reason is the long straight bridge between Honshu and Tsunoshima, which is the second longest bridge in Japan. The Tsunoshima Bridge has gotten attention as a famous sightseeing spot because of its beautiful views and because it has been used for many car advertisements."
Nice job on this. I look forward to learning about other sightseeing spots. :)
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About Tsunoshima( Sightseeing Spot)
Japan is consists of the four main islands mainly. and tThe most largest island is called Honshu. The westernmost part of Honshu is Yamaguchi Prefecture, where Abe Shinzo who is Japanese prime minister right now was born.Today, I'd like to introduce Tsunoshima, and there is located in the westernmost part of Yamaguchi Prefecture. Tsunoshima that is an island and is surrounded by beautiful sea, but that is not the only reason it is popular the high popular reason is not only what it is. Probably, the reason is that there is straight and long bridge which is between Honshu and Tsunoshima. Tsunoshima became becomes the a famous sightseeing spot because there is it has gotten attention as the setting for a car advertisement of the car. I have been to there more at least three times. I will introduce the most famous sightseeing spot for foreigners in Yamaguchi Prefecture next time.きれいな海ですね〜
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