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Could you check and correct my script? I'm a Japanese student. My English class give me a homework. But my English is very poor. So could you please check and correct my script ? You don't have to check the whole script.

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Hello my name is KY ,and I`d like to talk about Sinya Yamanaka and his work to create the first the Ipscells.

In 1981 ,while the study to regenerate the organ lost by sickness and an injury is performed. The EScells which is one of stem cells is developed. And that was expected regenerative medicine of an incurable disease.

But it was possible to get EScells from only an embryo in an occurrence early stage. So danger is exerted on a mother`s body and fertilized egg which should be a child is broken ,and each country government could write now regulation on a EScells research work.

To evade such problem Yamanaka making the Ipscells from a cell of mouse in 2006 ,a human skin cell in 2007.

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Background

Hello, my name is KY, and I`d like to talk about Sinya Yamanaka and his work to create the first the Ipscells.

In 1981, while the studying how to regenerate the organs lost by through sickness and an injury is performed., The EScells, which is one of the stem cells is  was developed. And that It was expected to turn into regenerative medicine of an for incurable diseases.

But However, it was only possible to get EScells from only an embryos during their in an occurrence early stages. So danger is exerted on a A mother's body is put in danger, and the fertilized egg (which should develop into a fetusbe a child) is broken. ,and each country Every government could write now regulation on a EScells research work should impose regulations on how the EScells research will be utilized.

To evade such problem To avoid any issues, Yamanaka making the created Ipscells from a cell of a mouse in 2006, and from a human skin cell in 2007.

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