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The Scar in my heart Why dont you be? you went of my life -- Why? ( I miss you ) My toad --- Aks me-- Why did you go with he? I sad, When I think in you Where are you Now? I always ask me The day that I see you of new ¡For someone special! ¡For othes a next door! "I Always miss you" Thank you for Listen me, :´)

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The Scar in my heart

Why don't you be? No tiene sentido esta frase y no sé lo que quieres decir.

Ah, ya entendí al ver tu comentario.

¿Por qué no estás? = Why aren't you here?

you went out of my life -- Why? ( I miss you )


My toad --- Asks me-- Why did you go with him?
I am sad when I think of you
Where are you now? I always ask myself 
The day that I see you again
¡For someone special!
¡For others a next door!  No tiene sentido " a next door" y no sé lo que quieres decir.

Ah, ya entendí al ver tu comentario.

For others, there is a way out.

"I always miss you"

Thank you for listening to me, :´)

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The Scar in my heart

Why dont you be?
you went of my life -- Why? ( I miss you ) <- There's no "Go of", the correct way is "Go off" which is used for bomb (explodes), gun (fires), or anything that stop working.
My toad --- Aks me-- Why did you go with him?
I'm sad, When I think of/ about you
Where are you Now? I always ask myself 
The day that I see you of new
¡For someone special!
¡For othes a next door!
"I Always miss you"

Thank you for listening to me/ Thanks for listening

There're some sentence I don't understand so I don't know it it's correct or not :'D 

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