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presentation 1 please correct it~ Hello, my name is mondo watanabe, and today i'd like to talk about HIdeyo noguchi and Carlos Finley and his work to reseach yellow fever. Yellow fever is the famous infection in Africa and South America .It suddenly develops fever, headache ,and vomiting. Carlos Finley, Cuban doctor, said yellow fever was transmitted by mosquito.After that, Hideyo Noguchi reseached this hypothesis and yellow fever. Reseach Question How is yellow transmitted many people who live in different country? 1881,Carlos Finley said the theory the mosquito transmit yellow fever. After that , Walter Reed conducted a experiment. 1, He gather the blood of the patient 2,He let the egg of the specific mosquito. 3,He let a mosquito stinging a subject. 4,some people who stingged by mosquito were dead. Conclusion and Future reseach Reed identified the mosqouto which transmitted illness and Carlos Finley's theory was proved. After that, HIdeyo Noguchi reseach more about yellow fever, but he was died by that illness. Yellow fever is needed more reseach in the future.

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presentation 1 please correct it~

Hello, my name is mondo watanabe, and today i'd like to talk about Hideyo Noguchi and Carlos Finley and his work to research yellow fever.
Yellow fever is the famous infection in Africa and South America. An infected person suddenly develops fever, headache, and vomiting.
Carlos Finley, a Cuban doctor said yellow fever is transmitted by mosquitos. After that, Hideyo Noguchi researched this hypothesis and yellow fever.

Reseach Question
How is yellow transmitted to many people who live in a different country?

In 1881 Carlos Finley presented the theory mosquitos transmit yellow fever. After that,  Walter Reed conducted a experiment.

1. He gathered the blood of the infected patient
2. He let the egg of the specific mosquito.
3. He let a mosquito sting a subject.
4. A few people stung by the mosquito died. 

Conclusion and Future reseach
Reed identified the mosquito which transmitted illness and Carlos Finley's theory was proven. 
After that, Hideyo Noguchi researched more about yellow fever, but he was killed by that illness. Further research into Yellow Fever is needed in the future. 
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presentation 1 please correct it~

Hello, my name is mondo watanabe, and today I'd like to talk about HIdeyo noguchi and Carlos Finley and their work to research yellow fever.
Yellow fever is the famous infection in Africa and South America.It causes a sudden fever, headache ,and vomiting.
Carlos Finley, a Cuban doctor, said yellow fever was transmitted by mosquitos. After that, Hideyo Noguchi researched this hypothesis concerning yellow fever.

Research Question
How is yellow transmitted to many people who live in different countries?

1881, Carlos Finley suggested the theory the mosquito transmits yellow fever. After that , Walter Reed conducted an experiment.

1, He gather the blood of the patient
2,He let the egg of the specific mosquito hatch.
3,He let a mosquito sting a subject.
4,Some people who were stung by the mosquito died.

Conclusion and Future research
Reed identified the mosquito which transmitted illness and Carlos Finley's theory was proved.
After that, HIdeyo Noguchi reseached more about yellow fever, but he was killed by that illness. More research on yellow fever is needed in the future.

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