"Never a Lady!
I am reading a book. It's a romantic novel that my best friend gave me a few months ago. I read the first chapter. I did not understand a lot of words and that scared me but I guess It means that I have to practice more.
The main character is a girl named Mary. She has a vision from her twin sister, Jo, who is in danger. Her father thinks Jo deserved whatever she is suffering because Jo abandoned her family to deliver herself at a sin's life.
Don't know if I'm expressing myself correctly. Hope you can help me with some advice about my writing.
Thanks!
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"Never a Lady!
I am reading a romantic novel that my best friend gave me a few months ago. I read the first chapter and did not understand a lot of words and that scared me but I guess It means that I have to practice more.
The main character is a girl named Mary. She has a vision from her twin sister, Jo, who is in danger. Her father thinks Jo deserved whatever she is suffering because Jo abandoned her family to lead a sinful life.
I don't know if I'm expressing myself correctly. I hope you can advise me about my writing.
Thanks!
Very well written!
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