Vacation in Turkey
This year we spent our vacation on the Aegean coast of Turkey in little beautiful city of Marmaris. It is situated in almost closed bay surrounded by picturesqe mountains and pine forests. There is long beach promenade where you can walk or bike (there are bikeways as well). My husband liked jogging in the morning along this promenade. Our hotel was situated on the first line and had it's own beach with sunbeds and sunshades. There were also two piers there we liked to sunbathe.
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Vacation in Turkey
This year we spent our vacation on the Aegean coast of Turkey in the beautiful little city of Marmaris. It is situated in an almost enclosed bay surrounded by picturesque mountains and pine forests. There is a long beach path where you can walk or bike (there are cycle paths as well). My husband likes jogging in the morning along this path. Our hotel was situated on the first line and had it's own beach area with sunbeds and umbrellas. There were also two piers there where we liked to sunbathe.Hey there :) . This is a nice little description :P . Some nice vocabulary like piers, pine forests - nice to imagine :) . Here are some corrections and explanations - hope they are helpful!
-Sam
closed bay = means people can't visit it, like a closed shop. You mean that it is surrounded by walls or something - and this is 'enclosed' - http://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/definition/english/enclosed?q=enclosed
[opinion] goes before [size] - "beautiful little" https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/adjectives/order-adjectives
"in the city of xxxxx" this is the structure you need.
'promenade' is quite old fashioned these days - http://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/definition/english/promenade_1?q=promenade
bikeways = cycle paths ;)
To be clearer - say 'beach area' because all of the sandy place next to the sea is the beach.
sunshades = 'umbrellas' I think you mean
What do you mean by "the first line" ? Where is this?
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