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We are what we wear Today, I will write about people appearance. This topic will probably be controversial because there are many people with different points of view. As example, I discuss a lot of time with my parents about this. Then, let’s start ! Last week, a man was interviewed by my boss because we needed people to be less overwhelmed. We have a lot of things to do ! When the man came, both my colleagues and me looked at him because him look was shocking since he wore piercings, tattoos, tracksuit, etc. We had never seen something like that for an interview and I have to recognize that all of my colleagues was surprised. Normally, people who come, wear a suit or something similar. The first impression was strange as I describe above but later I thought at my home about what had happened. Why did we shock him appearance? I think that it was because we live in a society where people looks matter for anything and a lot of times we forgot person’s abilities just for their appearance. Maybe, that man was the best… What would it have happened if the man had wore a suit ? Maybe, he had been selected for the job. After that experience, I think that the society should change their mind and accept those people because they can wear what they want as long as they do their work well, without problems. Even though, I also believe that if you represents your company image, you will need to take care of your public image and that includes clothes, etc. So, as you can see, it is tough to know when the people’s image matter and when not. However, I considered that the most important thing is always the respect. Thank you very much for reading this short article. The article is not based on a real story but I have tried to explain my thought about that big problem. I appreciate your corrections a lot because they help me to improve my writing skills.

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Even though Although, I also believe that if you represents your company image, you will need to take care (o.. be mindful of) of your public image and that includes (your) clothes clothing, etc. So, as you can see, it is tough to know when the people’s a person's image matters and when not it doesn't. However, I considered think that the most important thing is always the respect.

(o.. However, I always consider respect to be the most important thing.)


Thank you very much for reading this short article. The article is not based on a real story but I have tried to explain my thoughts about that this big problem (o.. key issue). I appreciate your corrections a lot because they help me to improve my writing skills.


No problem Rubén.. good work! Let me know if you have any questions.

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We are what we wear

Today, I will write about people's appearance. This topic will probably be controversial because there are many people with different points of view. As an example, I discuss this with my parents a lot. a lot of time with my parents about this. Then, let’s start!

Last week, a man was interviewed by my boss because we needed people to be less overwhelmed. We have a lot of things to do! When the man came, both my colleagues and me I looked at him because his look was shocking. since He wore had piercings, tattoos, and wore a tracksuit, etc. We had never seen something anything like this for an interview and I have to recognize say that all of my colleagues was were surprised. Normally, people who come for an interview wear a suit or something similar. The first impression was strange, as I described above but later when I got home I thought at my home about what had happened. Why did were we shocked by his appearance? I think that it was because we live in a society where people's looks matter for more than anything and a lot of times we forget the person’s abilities just for because of their appearance. Maybe, that man was the best… What would it have happened if the man had worn a suit? Maybe, he would have been selected for the job.

After that experience, I think that the society should change their its mind and accept these people because they can wear what they want as long as they do their work well, without problems.

Even though I also believe that if you represent your company image, you will need to take care of your public image and that includes clothes, etc. So, as you can see, it is tough to know when the people’s image matters and when not it does not. However, I considered that the most important thing is always the respect.

Thank you very much for reading this short article. The article is not based on a real story but I have tried to explain my thoughts about this big problem. I appreciate your corrections a lot because they help me to improve my writing skills.
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We are what we wear

Today, I will am going to write about people's appearance. This topic will probably be controversial because there are many people with different points of view. As an example, I discuss this a lot of time with my parents about this. Then So, let’s start !

Last week, a man was interviewed by my boss because we needed people to be less overwhelmed. We have a lot of things to do ! have a lot of work to do and we (therefore) need more people. When the man came, both my colleagues and me I looked at him because (o.. as) his look was shocking. since he wore He had piercings, tattoos, and was wearing a tracksuit, etc. We had never seen something anything like that for an interview and I have to recognize say that all of my colleagues was we were all surprised. Normally, people who come (for an interview) wear a suit or something similar. The first impression was that it was strange as I have described above, but later I thought at my home when I got home, I thought (more) about what had happened. Why did we shock him were we shocked by his appearance? I think that it was because we live in a society where people's looks (really) matter for anything and a lot of times we forget a person’s abilities just for because of their appearance. Maybe, that man was the best candidate… What would it have happened if the man had wore worn a suit ? Maybe, he had would have been selected for the job.

After that experience, I think feel that the society should change their mind be more open-minded and accept those people because they can wear what they want as long regardless of what they wear, as long as they do their work job well, without problems.

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