Those parent books, though didn't do their jobs as a guide for my parents, it do become mine. It paved way for me to chase my curiosity about myself, about other people, about the society and to ask the question why they can interact with each other----which is the major concern of psychologists. As an beautiful shape of combination of head and heart, psychology gives me a chance to jump out from the limited view of myself, but to be an observer to my emotions,behaviors and thoughts. It makes me to become a thinker who always trying to figure out the nature of the world. My passion on Biology and Chemistry is developed from this, and I enriched my knowledge from my A-level study in school. Their systematicness and the objectivity trained me to use critical thinking skills for analysis and verify the hypothesis, which is just what psychologists need but only should be even more cautions, after all, that's human 's minds.
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Is the grammar correct ?
When I was a little girl and had just learnt how to read, I decided to have a reading adventure in our study room. After a while scrambling through the shelves, I found myself starting this adventure with a parent book about child psychlogical development . I opened the book, focusing on the coloured pictures and trying to understand the long paragraphs and unfamiliar words. And suddenly, I broke the dimension wall. I stared at one paragraph: 'if your child made a mistake, ask her to help you to wash the socks, which could enhance her sense of responsibilities'. How interesting it was, because only yesterday this scene happened in our house. A new universe just opened in front of my eyes. A little girl now understood all the adult tricks. Now I am an adult, I chuckle when I asked my parents how they felt about those parent books. They said they were totally disappointed because I never acted as the book predicted.Those parent books, though they didn't do their jobs as a guide for my parents, did do mine. They paved the way for me to chase my curiosity about myself, about other people, about society and to ask the question how they can interact with each other----which is the major concern of psychologists. As a beautiful combination of head and heart, psychology gives me a chance to jump out from the limited view of myself, and to be an observer to my own emotions, behaviors and thoughts. It allows me to become a thinker who is always trying to figure out the nature of the world. My passion for Biology and Chemistry is developed from this, and I enriched my knowledge from my A-level study in school. Their systems and objectivity trained me to critically analyse and verify hypotheses, which is just what psychologists need to do, but only with cautions, after all, that's human 's minds.
Very well written!
Is the does its grammar correct ?
When I was a little girl and had just learnt how to read, I decided to have go on a reading adventure in our study room. After a while of scrambling with up the shelves, I found myself start in this adventure with a parental book about child psychological development . I opened the book, focusing on the coloured pictures and trying to understand the long paragraphs and unfamiliar words. And suddenly, I broke through the dimension wall. I was staring at one paragraph that I quote: 'if your child made a mistake, ask her to help you to wash the socks, which could enhance her sense of responsibilities'. How interesting because just yesterday this same scene happened in our house. A new universe had just shown in front of my eyes. A little girl now understand all your adult tricks. Now I am an adult, I snickered when I asked my parents how they feel about those parental books. They said they were totally disappointed because I never acted as the book predicted.Those parental books, though they didn't do their jobs as a guide for my parents, it do become mine. It paved the way for me to chase my curiosity about myself, about other people, about the society and to ask the question why they can interact with each other----which is the major concern of psychologists. In the beautiful shape combining head and heart, psychology gives me a chance to jump beyond out from the limited view of myself, but to be an observer to my emotions, behaviors and thoughts. It makes me to become a thinker who is always trying to figure out the nature of the world. My passion in biology and chemistry has developed from this, and I have enriched my knowledge from my A-level study in school. Their strict nature of systematic objectivity trained me to use critical thinking skills to analysis and verify the hypothesis, which is just what psychologists need, but should be even more cautious, after all, that's human 's minds.
What a fascinating life story! Thank you for sharing it with me. Please don't be discouraged by the yellow marking. Your story was like living a lifetime all in two paragraphs. I simply tried to reorganize it a little so the grammar agrees most of the time.
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