Write about a travel experience
I am going to talk about my travel in the USA.
Two years ago I went to New York city in order to attend my female cousin's wedding.
The wedding was amazing so was the travel.
I was part of two tourist groups in New York city and Denver. There were two bus that drove my family and I throughout ten different american states. We therefore saw many main american monuments or important places like the Niagar falls, the Yellow stone park, the Red Rock Park, the Mount Rushmore and so on. We also went to two prestigious american universties: Harvard and Yale University and we visited different museums.
All was so impressing, cars are bigger than european's, american people from multicultural cities are very friendly and welcoming, basically it was a very good time and I want to continue travelling as much as I can and explore the world !
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Write about a travel experience
I am going to talk about my travel in the USA.Two years ago I went to New York city in order to attend my female [you don't normally point out the gender of a cousin in English unless it's important to the point you're making, and even then it's better if you can show it from context, eg. use of "he/she/him/her". Not wrong but sounds strange] cousin's wedding.
The wedding was amazing and so was the travel.
I was part of two tourist groups in New York City and Denver. There were two buses [or "busses", both are correct] that drove my family and I throughout ten different American states. We therefore saw many main well-known American monuments or and important places like the Niagara Falls, the Yellowstone Park, the Red Rocks Park, the Mount Rushmore [these are all proper nouns, ie. names, and don't take "the"] and so on. We also went to two prestigious American universities, Harvard and Yale University, and we visited different various museums.
All was so impressing, It was all so impressive. The cars are bigger than European's ones, American people from multicultural cities are very friendly and welcoming, basically it was a very good time and I want to continue travelling as much as I can and explore the world !
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