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现在是秋天，今天是我朋友的生日。她今年15岁了，她想在咖啡馆里过生日，因为平日里朋友们都很忙，所以她选择星期天过生日，我也去。她说下午三点一刻来接我。我起床很早，十点半的时候我去洗了个澡和洗了头发。我看到我的手表已经三点了，我觉得时间过得很快，五分钟之后再看表还是三点，我发现我的表不走了，我给朋友打电话，她告诉我现在两点，叫我不用担心，我很高兴。
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今天是秋天？ what does this mean? Today is autumn? Autumn is a season, not a day.
我洗澡、洗头发
我看手表 已经三点了 我觉得时间（过得）很快
五分钟以后看手表 还是三点 我的手表不走了
朋友说，现在两点
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