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Please check my note! I think that traditional schools are better than distans edcation sistemed schools. School is the place that is not only learning subjects but learning how to live. The best way for learning how to make our life better one is spending a long time with the people face to face. There are many people who are involved in traditional schools, such as classmates, teachers, older students, younger students and close friends. Also these schools have some events that students have to produce together. These events give them precious memories, a seance of accomplishment and a good relationship with friends along with successful of them, and besides, we can learn how to solve some problems, how to face someone who has different opinions from mine, and how to know each other more. Such as these experiences will help to raise students motivation for studying hard. However I even think that all kinds of technologies have been developed so quickly. With this, our life styles have been changed to be convenient along with them, especially students lives seems more convenient than before. For example, almost of them have their own communication tools and they can use them better than adults. The other hand, some of students look to be tight with them all days from awaking to their bed time. The problem for them is that holding these tools in their hands and spend nervous time for waiting replies from their friends every day. Some of them are easy to give up handling it, and loose the way to school. In this case, it is good for them who are suffering from attending traditional classroooms to realize there are many types of schools, such as online schools as distance education. The most important thing is that every student deserves to have the right of studying, and it is good for us to be able to choose the best way from different styles of attending schools.

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Please check my note!

I think that traditional schools are better than distant educational systems. School is a place that is not only for learning subjects but also for learning about life. The best way to learn how to make our life better is to make connections with people . Traditional schools have several events that can be very useful and educational for students . These events can provide precious memories, good relationships ..., that will teach students how to be open-minded and strategic thinkers.


I could only go this far 

what you need to do, it to stop thinking in your original language and translate it afterward

try to study more Grammar, 
Prepositions , linking words , sentence structure  

 you have a good quantity of words in your vocabulary, what you need is the way to link it together 

Give Grammar more time, and I am sure you'll be able to write effectively and clearly 

best of luck  

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I have to know how to use singular form and plural form properly.

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