Drinking with my friend
I went drinking with my old friend. He was my school mate when I was high school student.
We met in Ueno the traditional area in Tokyo and went into Irish style pub,.
It was so luxurious inside the pub and decor was glittering since the day was close to Helloween .
We could drink some drinks at cheaper price(around 2 dollar) because it was before 7 pm called 'happy hour'.
Both of us drunk two glasses of drinks there.
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Drinking with my friend
I went to have drinks with my old friend. He's my old schoolmate from our high school days. or We've been friends since high school.We met in Ueno, a historical neighborhood in Tokyo, and went into an Irish style pub.
The pub's interior was very luxurious and it was decorated for Halloween. It was so luxurious inside the pub and decor was glittering since the day was close to Helloween .
We could drink have some drinks at a discounted cheaper price (around 2 dollars) because it was before 7 pm and we took advantage of the 'happy hour'.
Both of us drunk two glasses of drinks there. We had two drinks each.
1. "I went drinking" sounds like your purpose was to get drunk. So it's better to say "to have drinks".
2. I rewrote your sentence about the pub to make it sound better.
3. Price can't be cheaper, it can only be lower or discounted. So, it's "cheaper shoes" but "lower price". You WILL hear native English speakers say "cheaper price" but that's wrong.
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