Composition 8A
Please correct any grammatical errors of my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be so complicated. Thanks!
According to an evening news, Tokyo had a heavy snow for the first time in ten years.
WHO expects that the total number of too fat adults would be 16 billions around the world. I think the number would be up by 40 percents in ten years.
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Composition 8A
Please correct any grammatical errors of in my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be so too complicated. Thanks!According to an the evening news, Tokyo had a heavy snowfall for the first time in ten years.
The WHO expects that the total number of too fat overweight adults would will be 16 billions around the world. I think the number would be up will increase by 40 percents in ten years.
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