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Composition 8b Please correct any grammatical errors of my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be so complicated. Thanks! The girl who used to prefer reading books alone to playing with other children before, perform well in Japan’s national football team. The snow started to fall 20 minutes after we arrived school. Matthew will be able to leave hospital in two weeks. Be sure to come to the airport at least one hour before your departure time.

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Composition 8b

Please correct any grammatical errors in my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be so complicated. Thanks!


The girl who used to prefer reading books alone to playing with other children, performed well in Japan’s national football team. - When you use 'used to' it indicates the past so 'before' is not necessary here.

The snow started to fall 20 minutes after we arrived in school.

Matthew will be able to leave hospital in two weeks.

Be sure to come to the airport at least one hour before your departure time.

Hello Lily,

Just a couple of corrections in the first 2 sentences, the final 2 are fine.

Best wishes

Bob

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