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Why do you think people attend college or university? 【People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university?】 The reason people decide to go to university is diverse. Students spend much time and money going to university. I think there are three reasons why students aspire to study at university. First of all, four years when they study at university include much freely available time. They can spend its time investing to expand their future career on their own. Some students may dedicate themselves to playing sports and their dream may come true as a professional player. Some students may focus on their research and may become an university professor in the future. There is a great possibility for four years when they are at university. Secondly, students can gain a variety of experiences by means of the status as an university student. For example, they can ask their professor any questions freely in the class. On the other hand, they can take part in various internships as a student in any companies. Through these processes, they can expand their perspective and choose the right option how they want to work in the future. Finally, they can get along with students who have various background and unique culture and expand their circle of friends. Its experience is totally different from the one at high school. The communication with other students who have different culture and nationality would give them new perspective and idea. As I wrote above, they can also talk with business man through internship and the elderly through volunteer activity. These experiences would have great and beneficial influence on their life. In conclusion, although students spend much expense on going to university, I strongly believe that these factors, freely available time, status as a student, and expanding circle of friends, lead to good career. Therefore, they go to university in other to pursue new possibility. Please give me your opinion in comment space. PS. If you have different ideas about this theme, please share them in comment space!!! Thank you

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The reason people decide to go to a university is diverse. Students spend much time and money going to university (I would say, Students spend a lot of time and money to go to college.). I think there are three reasons why students aspire to study at a university.

First of all, four years when they study at university include much freely available time. students have a lot of free time during the four years that they attend college. (or First of all, students have a lot of time outside of classes to do other things while they are attending college.)  They can spend its their time investing to expand their future career on their own. Some students may dedicate themselves to playing sports and their dream may come true as a professional player. Some (I would say, Other) students may focus on their research and may become an a university professor in the future. There is are a a lot of great possibility opportunities for four years when they are at university for students while they are attending college.
Secondly, students can gain a variety of experiences by means of ( I would say, 'because of') the their status as an a university student. For example, they can ask their professor any questions freely in the class. On the other hand, they can take part in various internships as a student in any  many companies. Through these processes, they can expand their perspective and choose the right option how they want to work in the future(<--this isn't very clear. Maybe, "and choose the best path to take to help them reach their future career goals") .

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Why do you think people attend college or university?

【People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university?】

The reason people decide to go to university is diverse. Students spend much time and money going to university. (I would say something like "Students spend a lot of time and money to go to university".)  I think there are three reasons why students aspire to study at university.
First of all, during the four years when they the spend studying at university includes much (a lot of) freely available time. They can spend its that time investing to expand their future career on their own. Some students may dedicate themselves to playing sports and their dream may come true as a professional player. Some students may focus on their research and may become an a university professor in the future. There is are a lot of great possibility (possibilites or opportunities) for in the four years when while they are at university.
Secondly, students can gain a variety of experiences by means (because of) of their status as an a university student. For example, they can ask their professor any questions freely in the class. On the other hand Also, they can take part in various internships as a student in any companies company. Through these processes, they can expand their perspective and choose the right option of how they want to work in the future.*
Finally, they can get along with students who have various backgrounds and unique culture and expand their circle of friends. Its The experience is totally different from the one at high school. The communication with other students who have different cultures and nationality would give them new perspectives and ideas. As I wrote above, they can also talk with business man men through internship and the elderly through volunteer activity. These experiences would have great and beneficial influences on their life.
In conclusion, although students spend much expense on going  a lot of expenses to go to university, I strongly believe that these factors: freely available time, status as a student, and expanding circle of friends, lead to a good career. Therefore, they go to university in other to pursue new possibility possibilites. Please give me your opinion in comment space.

PS. If you have different ideas about this theme, please share them in comment space!!! Thank you

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