Please, whould you be so kind to correct my poetry?

You know..your sorrow is not gone             You know...your sorrow has not gone

there is a reason                                           There is a reason 

For this though                                            For its persistence ( of a person's sorrow )
With leaves our memories are gone       With the leaves our memories are gone
It is not easy.. let it go                                It is not easy...let it go!
the emptiness comes and grows           The emptiness comes and grows
But..there is calm after the storm -       But there is calm after the storm 
Serenity and peace                                  Serenity and peace
Your soul must be released                   Your soul must be released
Yes..I feel no emptiness anymore       Yes...I feel no emptiness anymore 
My face feels the Sun's warmth          My face feels the Sun's warmth
Let's new coming in our life                New things come in our lives
These leaves remind me of that...    These leave remind me of that...

Well done! A very nice poem. It is very difficult to correct someone's poetry as the feelings come from within the poet and the tenses in the verb can be changed for dramatic effect. The piece is uniquely your own. But there were one or two changes I made to correct the grammar. There is a great deal of fluidity when writing poetry and I was surprised and delighted with your poem.

David Fox