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Paella I will introduce what is Paella. Paella is Spanish food which made with meat, rice, seafood, and some vegetables. Rice flew into Spain at the Middle Ages. After rice flew into Spain, many people made and ate something same as Paella. In a result, 19c the food called Paella. Starting position of Paella was at the festival. Some people mixed rice, fishes, and spice on yhe food and at the Royalty party, people used left food to make Paella. A Many people thought Paella is the most popular Spanish food but Spain people didn't thought like it. They thought Paella is just a Valensia food.

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Paella

I will introduce what is Paella. (I will introduce to you what "paella" is 가 더 자연스러워요).


Paella is a Spanish food (dish) which is made up of with meat, rice, seafood, and some vegetables. Rice flew was imported/introduced into Spain at during the Middle Ages. After rice flew imported/ introduced into Spain, many people made and ate a dish similar to (something same) as Paella. In  As a result, 19c the food called Paella. (19세기에 paella라는 음식이 생겼다는 것을 말씀하시는 건가요? - As a result)

Initially, Starting position of Paella was eaten at the festivals. Some people mixed rice, fishes, and spices on the food together and at the Rroyalty party (royal parties?), people used left-over food to make Paella.
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Many people thought think Paella is the most popular Spanish food, but Spainish people didn't thought like it don't agree. They thought  think Paella is just a Valensia ? food.


빠예아의 흥미로운 역사에 대해 쓰셨는데 잘 배웠습니다. ^^

a, the 같은 정관사를 쓰실 때 주의하시고,

시제도 일치시켜주세요. 예를 들어 마지막 문장에 Many people thought... is the most.. 이렇게 쓰셨는데  many people think, ... is 로 쓰시는 게 맞습니다. 

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