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My View on Autism
Autism is much more common than most people consider. People from all nationality and different backgrounds can be autistic, although it emerges to affect more men than women. At present, there are approximately 1% people with autism all over the world, hence we can know there are over ten million autistic people in China.
There is often nothing about how people with autism look that set them apart from other people. But autism people may communicate, interact and learn in ways that are different from most other people. Initially, they have quiet a few kinds of obstacle to the feeling and expression of language. Moreover, they have social barries and can not build normal relationships with people. Eventually, they have narrow interests and rigid behavior. Every coin has two sides. People with autism also have their advantages. They are exceeding special, imaginative and loyal. Meanwhile, they are able to concentrate on certain interests for a long time and don't like to judge others. People with autism have difficulty in living and studying. Therefore, by some means or other must take measures to solve problems.
It is vital for us to help autism be better. On the one hand, from the standpoint of government, they should establish autism funds and policies on rehabilitation. On the other hand, from perspective of parents, they can learn about education psychology related to autism to better help their children recover.
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Autism is much more common than most people consider. People from all nationality and different backgrounds can be autistic, although it emerges to affect more men than women. At present, there are approximately 1% people with autism all over the world, hence we can know there are over ten million autistic people in China.
The prevalence rate of Autism is much more higher than most people can consider. Any couple in the world can give birth to a child with Autism but parents with ancestral history of Autism are more likely to give birth to Autistic children. With reference to the difference between male and female, boys are more likely to be the victim of Autism than girls. Around 1 percent of the population on Earth are the victim of Autism and that is not a small number. There is no difference among peoples as a whole, accordingly we may infer how many people are victims of Autism in China.
I am not a native speaker, but here is the statement about Autism revised from your writing. If you need any advice to the writing, you may contact me in private.
The prevalence rate of Autism is much more higher than most people can consider. Any couple in the world can give birth to a child with Autism but parents with ancestral history of Autism are more likely to give birth to Autistic children. With reference to the difference between male and female, boys are more likely to be the victim of Autism than girls. Around 1 percent of the population on Earth are the victim of Autism and that is not a small number. There is no difference among peoples as a whole, accordingly we may infer how many people are victims of Autism in China.
I am not a native speaker, but here is the statement about Autism revised from your writing. If you need any advice to the writing, you may contact me in private.
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thank u. "There is often nothing about how people with autism look that set them apart from other people" means that people with autism are not different from normal people about apprearance.
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1,"There is often nothing about how people with autism look that set them apart from other people"i dont understand this sentence, please help. 2,"Moreover, they have social barries and can not build normal relationships with people" the last word can be "others" or "other people", it sounds more natural, may be? 3.last paragraph, it is vital for us to help autistic people , it is educational psychology.......hope im helpful
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