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Shooting star ☆彡.。 I saw a shooting star the way back home yesterday.

It's 2nd time for me of my life.

I saw a shooting star on first time when I was high school student .

That day is can't to forget for me.

Have you ever seen the shooting star ??

私は昨日、帰り道で流れ星を見ました。

それは私の人生の中で、2回目です。

私が初めて流れ星を見たのは

高校生のときでした。

その日は私にとって忘れられない1日です。

あなたは流れ星を見たことが

ありますか??

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Shooting star ☆彡.。

I saw a shooting star the on my way back home yesterday.

It's the 2nd time for me of in my life.

I saw a shooting star on the first time when I was a high school student .

That day is can't to forget for me I can never forget.

Have you ever seen the a shooting star ??


"It's the 2nd time for me in my life" is correct English, but "for me" and "in my life" are a bit repetitive as they mean the same thing here. So I suggest that you say "it's the 2nd time for me" or "It's the 2nd time in my life", that would be better writing style.

Note how you say " I saw a shooting star ..." in your 1st sentence? You want to ask "Have you ever seen a shooting star ..." the same way in your last sentence also, and not "the".

When you see a shooting star, you make a wish, it may come true.  Good luck.


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Shooting star ☆彡.。

I saw a shooting star on the way back home yesterday.

It's 2nd time for me in my life.

I saw a shooting star for the first time when I was high school student .

That day I can never forget.

Have you ever seen a shooting star ??

私は昨日、帰り道で流れ星を見ました。

それは私の人生の中で、2回目です。

私が初めて流れ星を見たのは

高校生のときでした。

その日は私にとって忘れられない1日です。

あなたは流れ星を見たことが

ありますか??

Very well written! And very lucky (it means you will have 30 years' good luck!).

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Did he or she(that pop star) shoot somebody? If yes, you should have called the police.

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