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the circle Yesterday i see the movie "The circle". This is a movie of kind thriller/ dramatic. In this film the protagonist (Emma Watson) is a girl that find a job in a firm of telecomunications, thank's to the help of your friend (interpreted from Karen GIllar of Doctor Who). This is a movie that tell of Privacy, surveillance and freedom of the people in a world not too far in the future, where the tecnology has taken the power. This is a movie that to reflect...

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The Circle

Yesterday I see saw the movie "The Circle".
This is  It's a movie of kind thriller/ dramatic 
In the film, the protagonist (Emma Watson) is a girl that  who  finds a job in a firm of telecomunication telecommunications firm.  

thanks to   for  the help of your friend (interpreted from Karen GIllar of Doctor Who).

This is a movie that tells of privacy, surveillance and freedom of the people in a world not too far in the future, where the technology has taken the power.
This is a movie that to reflect... 

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the circle

Yesterday i see  saw the movie "The circle".
This is a movie of kind thriller/ dramatic.
In this film the protagonist (Emma Watson) is a girl that finds a job in a telecommunications firm of telecomunications, thank's  Thanks to the help of your her friend (interpreted  played by from Karen GIllar of Doctor Who). This is a movie that tell talks about  of Privacy, surveillance and freedom of the people in a world not too far in the future, where the tecnology has taken the power.
This is a movie that to reflect...



Good job! I noticed a few mistakes with the 3rd person -s. In English, verbs that are in the third person need an -s attached to the verb. Overall very easy to understand. :)

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