My first day in the gym was a disaster!
I live in a residence of a college and I have the priority of have free access to the GYM, but I have never gone until yesterday.
The last year I started working out, I watched videos to exercise because in France the GYM is very expensive I needed to pay all the year and that didn't work for me because I traveled all the time.
So now that I have a free Gym I don't go, I am not motivated, but yesterday I was motivated because I saw in the mirror my stomach and I am a little bit fat HAHAHA so I decided to go, but when I arrived I saw many machines and a boy was sitting at a desk so I went to talk with him but the problem is that I'm very shin so I didn't ask him how I can used all these machines because I thing that he is going to judge me, Then I rode a bicycle for 30 minutes and finally I went because I didn't know what to do. it was my first day in a Gym but was horrible because there is not a trainer who guides you , so I was very lose.
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My first day in the gym was a disaster!
I live in a college dorm and I have the priority benefit of having free access to the GYM, but I had never gone until yesterday.The last time I started working out, I watched videos to exercise because in France the GYM is very expensive I needed to pay all the year and that didn't work for me because I traveled all the time.
So now that I have a free Gym I don't go, I am not motivated, but yesterday I was motivated because I saw my stomach in the mirror and I am a little bit fat HAHAHA so I decided to go, but when I arrived I saw many machines and a boy was sitting at a desk so I went to talk with him but the problem is that I'm very shy so I didn't ask him how to use all these machines because I think that he is going to judge me. Then I rode a bicycle for 30 minutes and finally I left because I didn't know what to do. it was my first day in a Gym but was horrible because there is not a trainer who guides you , so I was very lost.
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My first day in the gym was a disaster!
I live in a residence of a college college dorm and I* have the priority benefit of have having free access to the a gym, but I have had never gone until yesterday.The last year I started working out last year. I watched videos to exercise because in France the gym is very expensive and I needed to pay all for the whole year. and That didn't work for me because I traveled all the time.
So now that I have a free gym I don't go. I am not motivated, but yesterday I was motivated because I saw my stomach in the mirror my stomach and I am a little bit fat HAHAHA so I decided to go. but When I arrived I saw many machines and a boy guy was sitting at a the desk so I went to talk with him. but The problem is that I'm very shin shy so I didn't ask him how I can used use all these the machines. because I thing thought that he is was going to judge me, Then So I rode a bicycle for 30 minutes and finally I went left because I didn't know what to do. It was my first day in a gym but it was horrible because there is not a trainer who guides you , so I was very lose lost.
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*No es incorrecto pero es mejor sin el «I»
*Algunas de las oraciones eran demasiadas largas. Por eso las separé
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