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end-of-term party this is a PET exercise and I have to write to my friend Ben about our end-of-term party. Hi Ben how are you? I hope you didn't forget the end-of-term party. It will be saturday evening at 5:00 p.m. at gym school. I already bought drink and food but I'm still searching a DJ. Do you know anyone? I will pick you up at 4:00 p.m. to decorate the gym. Let me know as soon as possible. bye Giorgia

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end-of-term party

this is a PET exercise and I have to write to my friend Ben about our end-of-term party.
Hi Ben
how are you? I hope you didn't forget the end-of-term party? It will be on Saturday evening at 5:00 p.m. in the school gym. I already brought* drink and food but I'm still searching for a DJ. Do you know of anyone?
I will pick you up at 4:00 p.m. to (decorate??) the gym. Please let me know ASAP. bye
Giorgia

*brought = "bringed", or, bought = "buyed". Both "bring" and "buy" are irregular verbs, and many people (English speakers, too) confound them. It is hard to know which you meant.

Very well written!

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End-of-term party

This is a PET exercise and I have to write to my friend Ben about our end-of-term party.
Hi Ben,
How are you? I hope you haven't forgotten about the end-of-term party. It will be on Saturday evening at 5:00 p.m. in the school gym. I have already bought some drink and food food and drink, but I'm still searching for a DJ. Do you know anyone?
I will pick you up at 4:00 p.m. to help me decorate the gym. Let me know [let you know what?] as soon as possible. Bye.
Love from,

Giorgia


Use capital letters at the beginning of your sentences, and full stops at the end. Do not be lazy in your writing.

"Drink and food" is not "wrong" but it's just not in the correct order. In English, we say "food and drink" in that specific order. 

There are many expressions like this, that have their own specific order. Another example: black and white, not white and black. 

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