Composition 6B
Please correct any grammatical errors of my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be so complicated. Thanks!
When you go out of a warm room to cold outside, your body will be shivering. This prevents our bodies from lose the temprerature.
When you go out of a warm room to cold outside, your body will be shivering. if you shiver, you can keep your body temperature.
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Composition 6B
Please correct any grammatical errors in of my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be too so complicated. Thanks!When you go out of a warm room into the cold outside, your body will be shivering. This prevents our bodies from losing heat. the temprerature.
When you go out of a warm room into the cold outside, your body will be shivering. When you shiver you don't lose body heat. if you shiver, you can keep your body temperature.
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