Holidays in Bariloche My girlfriend and I were in holidays last month. We've been in Bariloche. Bariloche is a small city in the South of Argentina, also is known like Patagonian. The city and the ar

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Erivelton Camelo

Holidays in Bariloche My girlfriend and I were in holidays last month. We've been in Bariloche. Bariloche is a small city in the South of Argentina, also is known like Patagonian. The city and the argertinian people are lovely. Everyone is very welcome there! We visited many places like Cerro Tronador (or Hill Thunder), this is a inative volcano between Argentina and Chile. Also we visited Cerro Campanario, Cerro Otto and the ski station called Cerro Catedral. We loved there because the weather was very cold and we saw snow! There are many craft breweries, so we were forced (I'm joking) to drink many beers. Probably this was the best part of trip. I bought small gifts for my family and bring some beers to drink in my home. I'm sure in the future we might revisited there again.

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Holidays in Bariloche

My girlfriend and I were on holiday last month. We were in Bariloche.
Bariloche is a small city in the South of Argentina, also is known as Patagonia.
The city and the Argentinian people are lovely. Everyone is very welcome there!
We visited many places like Cerro Tronador (or Hill Thunder), this is a inactive volcano between Argentina and Chile. Also we visited Cerro Campanario, Cerro Otto and the ski station called Cerro Catedral.
We loved it there because the weather was very cold and we saw snow!
There are many craft breweries, so we were forced (I'm joking) to drink many beers. Probably this was the best part of the trip.
I bought small gifts for my family and brought some beers back to drink at home.
I'm sure in the future we might visit there again.

Hello Erivelton,

It certainly sounds like you had a good time. I am glad you enjoyed your holiday.

A few corrections, in the first line you talk about last month - this is finished action in finished time so you should use the past simple. Towards the end we would say bring sth back - to return with something and in the very last line you used revisited - first of all might is a modal verb and it is always followed by an infinitive and again gives the idea of 're' and sounds much more natural in the way I corrected.

Good work!

Bob

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Holidays in Bariloche

My girlfriend and I were in holidays last month. We've been in Bariloche.
Bariloche is a small city in the South of Argentina, also is known as Patagonian.
The city and the argertinian people are lovely. Everyone is very welcome there!
We visited many places like Cerro Tronador (or Hill Thunder), this is was (i think you should write "it WAS" not "it IS" cuz u r talkin about past ) a inactive volcano between Argentina and Chile. Also we visited Cerro Campanario, Cerro Otto and the ski station called Cerro Catedral.
We loved there because the weather was very cold and we saw snow!
There are many craft breweries, so we were forced (I'm joking) to drink many beers. Probably this was the best part of trip.
I bought small gifts for my family and brought some beers to drink in my home.
I'm sure in the future we mightwill ( if u use SURE in the beginning of the sentence the chance of going there again is 100% , therefore u cant use MIGHT in the sentence cuz it's use is for announcing doubt in decision ) revisit there again.

[good luck]

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