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Technology The technology is not a thing, the technology is a moment, is a resourse. It is the walk of the Science inserted in our lives. The technology is an relative, namely, the technology for me is a concept different that your. For example, for the premitives a mirror was a technology, today we consider the mirror an usual object, and flying car a technology. Basically, technology is an target, is the state that I want to reach. The technology transforms our lives, for example, we use the technology to sleep, to wake up, to walk, to eat, to talk, etc. One of the most high technology that we use today is the smartphone, because I can do everything by it, and I can stay connected with everyone very easily, and this may make our days different. But the technology has a problem, it accelerate our lives and this may not be good, because we will not get to enjoy the moments, we will just have records. The technology might be more fun and slow so that we could enjoy it more. The technology is a need in our lives today, we couldn’t live without it, because we depends a lot of it. The technology is always growing and transforming. Certainly, the technology will change the world.

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Technology is not a thing, technology is a moment; a resource. It is the walk of Science* inserted in our lives. Technology is an relative, namely for me, technology is a concept different (than your.?) For example, for primitives tribes a mirror was a technology, while today we consider the mirror an everyday object, while a flying car is a technology. Basically, technology is a target, or the state that I want to reach.
Technology transforms our lives, for example, we use it to sleep, to wake, to walk, to eat, to talk, etc. One of the most high technologies that we use today is the smartphone, because we can do everything by it, and we can stay connected with everyone very easily, and this may make our days different. But technology has a problem; it accelerates our lives and this may be bad, because we will not get to enjoy the moments, we will just have records. Technology could be more fun and slow so that we could enjoy it more.
The technology is a need in our lives today; we cannot live without it, because we depends on it so much. The technology is always growing and transforming. Certainly, the technology will change the world.

*unlike French, German, Spanish(?) etc, English never capitalises abstract nouns, eg, it writes  .... love, faith, hope, charity, science, ... and not ... the love, the faith, the hope, the charity, the science etc. Sometimes it capitalises them to Love, Faith, Hope, Charity, Science, ... etc, but this is rare and more poetical.

Very well written!

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