First Composition here! This is the first article I wrote here, I think it might be a good way to learn language through writing composition. I am now in the second year of graduate school, majoring i

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First Composition here! This is the first article I wrote here, I think it might be a good way to learn language through writing composition. I am now in the second year of graduate school, majoring in big data. I used Grammarly, so it will correct some mistake when I wrote it, but not so sure it's that well or not! The main thing I focusing now is school, learning Python and Java. New to programming world so sometimes it makes me quite frustrated. Really hope that I can get a good job after I graduate. I don't even have time to window shopping, hanging out with friends now. Someone said that being a student is quite nice, but a the same time you need to realize the truth that you are poor and no time for fun. Also the stress from school. But I think I should cherish all the stage in my life. I can only be grade student once normally, isn't it?

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This is my first composition here!

This is the first article I've written here. I think writing notebook entries might be a good way to help me learn English. I am now studying in my second year of my masters degree in big data. I used www.grammarly.com to help me with correction of my mistakes, but I'm not sure if it is any good or not!

My main focus at the moment is school, learning Python and Java coding. I am new to the programming world so sometimes I can get quite frustrated. I really hope that I can get a good job after I graduate. I don't even have time to go window shopping or hang out with friends anymore. Some say that being a student is quite nice, but at the same time you have to realize that you don't have much money or time for fun. Also, there is a lot of stress from school, but I think I should try to cherish all the stages of my life. I can only be a masters student once right?

Hi Alice - You did well here, but try not to use any grammar check websites. They use automatic tools to correct grammar and they are not very accurate. You will learn much better if you try to correct things yourself :)

Good luck!

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