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MY HOME TOWN My home town name is trichy which located in india ,it is also known as a rockfort city that i completed my studies in my city. my city is a second clean city my country among 430 states. i am very proud to birth here,then my college name also is trichy engineering college. the ganga ,the cauvery rivers also running in my city we are also having bath in those rivers while i bathe getting very enjoyment.

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My Home Town

My home town's name is Trichy which is located in India ,it is also known as a Rockfort City, and I completed my studies here.
My city is the second cleanest city in my country out of 430 states. I am very proud to be born here. My college's name is Trichy Engineering College. The Ganga and Cauvery Rivers run through my city, and we bathe in those rivers, which I enjoy doing.

This isn't too bad in terms of grammar. I think the biggest problem is you need to capitalize proper nouns (like names of places and people). Keep up your language learning!

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River Ganga doesn't flow through your city.

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