Print control
Print control was common to all nations, with the exception, in part, of the Kingdom of Great Britain. Censorship not only prevented the free discussion of political issues, pre-empting texts against sovereigns, or government policies. It also distorted the objective description of the facts, especially those related to powerful people. The private concerts opened to a selected public, the compositions performed in noble circles by court musicians, noblemen, or especially noblewomen, were never panned. The nobles financed festivals and gazettes; so journalist, as expected, wrote exactly what he was ordered to.
While the secular arm secured the "right" punishment to the dissidents, the newspaper was concerned that the fame of rulers was never questioned. Journalists, in fact, only reported the "official" news.
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Print State Control of the press
Print control State control of the press was common to all nations, with the exception, in part, of the Kingdom of Great Britain. Censorship not only* prevented the free discussion of political issues, pre-empting texts against sovereigns, or government policies. It also distorted the objective description of the facts, especially those related to powerful people. The private concerts opened to a selected public, the compositions performed in noble circles by court musicians, noblemen, or especially noblewomen, - these were never panned. The nobles financed festivals and gazettes; so the journalist, as expected, wrote exactly what he was ordered to.While the secular arm secured the "right" punishment to the dissidents, the newspaper was concerned that the fame of rulers was never questioned. Journalists, in fact, only reported the "official" news.
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Very, very well written. Sounds completely fluent.
We don't really say 'print control' - it doesn't quite sound natural although it's understandable. I think 'State control of the press' sounds a little better.
* 'not only' should always be followed by a 'but' somewhere later in the sentence: 'Not only was X bad because of ... but it was also harmful because of ...' Since your sentence is very long, though, you can't really add more to it without making the sentence a 'run-on sentence' (our English term for a sentence that's too long.) I think it sounds better just removing 'not only'
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