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Testimonial
I always had doubts about what I should to do when I grew up. It is an important choice that everyone has to make at some point in their life, and I didn't want to make the wrong choice. When I was in the pre-school my dream was to be a dentist, I don't know why, but I believed this profession to be very respectable, because they help people.
When I was in the elementary school I started to become more interested in math and less interested in biology, and because of this Civil Engineering seemed to be a better course (or "path") for me, but for some reason, it still didn't seem right.
So now I'm in my last year in the high school and finally I found the right thing for me. I decided to do computer engineering. At some point in my life I started to love technology and everything I can do with that. Now I hope that I've made the right choice and I hope that this really will make me happy, I'd also like to gain more knowledge by traveling around various countries and be a great professional (*doesn't sound natural, but not sure how to correct because I'm not sure of your exact meaning).
Great job - a lot of my corrections are suggestions to make your writing sound more natural, but everything you said can be understood.
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