My marriage
Hello, My name's Floriana and i Live in potenza (italy). A month ago I married, And that day was The most beautiful day of my life. It was all perfect. Me and my husband were Very excited. After church cerimony we were go to celebration The marriage in a hotel on The beach. We had take a Lot of photo and At midnight we had a swin in The pool. We were Very happy. We never forget that day
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At midnight we swam in the pool.
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My marriage
Hello, My name's Floriana and I live in Potenza (italy). A month ago I got married and that day was the most beautiful day of my life. It was all perfect. Me and my husbandMy husband and I* were very excited. After the church ceremony we were go to celebration celebrated the marriage in a hotel on the beach. We had take took a lot of photos and at midnight we had a swim in the pool. We were very happy. We will never forget that day.----------------------------------------------
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* 'me and my husband' è molto informale in inglese; è piu corretto dire/scrivere 'My husband and I ...'
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