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5. What is the Filmmaker Saying With The Film
Like Feat’s need, the filmmaker also want to the war should be ended and no one hurts and dies. The Feta’s eyes in the very last shot, gazing the audiences, are the main message of this movie I think. Because of our violent action and using weapons, even the innocent being like a baby dies. Thus, we should stop this.
6. Which scene did you like the most and why.
The last scene. Even though it looks quite obvious about telling the message, it also looks quite poetic. Her eyes and face is hided by other soldiers. Through this image, I also can ponder that stopping the war would be not easy. There are so many bothers to do that.
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5. What is the Filmmaker Saying With about The Film
Like Feat’s need, the filmmaker also want to the war should to be ended and no one hurts and dies. The Feta’s eyes in the very last shot scene, which gazing gazed the audiences, are was the main message of this movie, I think. Because of our violent actions and using weapons, even the innocent being like a baby dies. Thus, we should stop this.
6. Which scene did you like the most and why.
The last scene. Even though it looked quite obvious about telling the message, it also looked quite poetic. Her eyes and face were hid is hided by other soldiers. Through this image scene, I also can also ponder think that stopping the war would be not be easy. There are so many things to bothers to do that.
Like Feat’s need, the filmmaker also want to the war should to be ended and no one hurts and dies. The Feta’s eyes in the very last shot scene, which gazing gazed the audiences, are was the main message of this movie, I think. Because of our violent actions and using weapons, even the innocent being like a baby dies. Thus, we should stop this.
6. Which scene did you like the most and why.
The last scene. Even though it looked quite obvious about telling the message, it also looked quite poetic. Her eyes and face were hid is hided by other soldiers. Through this image scene, I also can also ponder think that stopping the war would be not be easy. There are so many things to bothers to do that.
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