May 27, 2011 A bad day
Today is not a nice day, anything were happened .
At first,it was no power all day,it's lead to I can't normal work,in fact it was something I need to finish today .
In addition , one of my college was hit by a car ,and now he is in the hospital . I don't know the specific situations ,I just heard it's very serious,maybe he can not rescue back .When I learned that information I was silly .So suddenly , I can't accept it .Why a good man suddenly become so ...The most angry is the driver fled .How can he hit after escaping ?Did he heart secure ? Did he knew the consequences have so serious ?
Life is so fragile ...
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May 27, 2011 A bad day
Today was not a nice day, everything happened .
At first, there was no power all day, because of this I was not able to work normally (or you can write: so I couldn't complete my work), in fact it was something I need to finish today.
In addition , one of my college peers (friend?) was hit by a car, and now he is in the hospital. I don't know the specific situation, I just heard it's very serious, maybe he cannot be revived. When I heard the news I was silly (?). It's so sudden, I can't accept it. How a good man suddenly became so ... The most angering part is that the driver fled. How can he escape after hitting someone ? Does he have a heart? Does he know the consequences?
Life is so fragile ...
We call them "hit and run drivers". I remember a news reporter in New York City got pretty injured because of a hit and run accident.
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May 27, 2011 A bad day
Today was not a nice day, everthing happened.First,_there was a power failure all day,_so I couldn't work normally,_in fact there is something I need to finish by today .
In addition , one of my colleges was hit by a car,_and now he is in the hospital . I don't know the specific situation,_I just heard it's very serious,_maybe he won't make it .When I found out that, I felt silly .It was so sudden, I can't accept it .Why a good man suddenly became so ...The most annoying is that the driver fled .How can he escape after hitting somebody?_Didn't he have a heart? Did he know the consequences had been so serious ?
Life is so fragile ... **Yes, indeed!! I'm so sorry...
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