my grey sweater. please correct if there are any mistakes, thank u
A favorite piece of clothing that I have is a grey sweater which was received from my mom. At that time, i was going to college, and i heard of that changchun was extremely chilly in winter. Hence, i decided to buy a warm sweater to pass the winter. Coincidentally, my mom just learned how to knit sweaters, so she wanted to show her skills and decided to knit a wool sweater for me, which can save money as well. Well since it was the first time for my mom to knit, the sweater is simple and doesn't have any other patterns. More interestingly, the sweater ought to be a turtleneck, when it almost finished, there was not enough wool, so the collar is much low than I expected. Apart from that, the sweater is very comfortable and can be worn in shivery winter. In addition, the sweater is of medium size and fits me well. Also, it is easy to be worn with any clothing due to its monotone color and simple design. Unfortunately, after two years' wearing, the sweater had split at the seams. Although i asked my mom whether she can knit another one for me, cause knitting a sweater takes a lot of time and energy, my mom refused to knit and i had to buy a new one. Although sweaters selling in shop are well-designed and more beautiful than the old one, they cannot provide the feeling the old one gave me, I mean, every time I was homesick, with that sweater I felt like that my mom was accompanying me.
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my grey sweater. please correct if there are any mistakes, thank u
My favourite piece of clothing that I own is a grey sweater that my Mother gave me. She bought it for me when I was at college. I had heard that Changchun was extremely chilly in winter so i decided I would need a warm sweater. Coincidentally, my Mother had just learnt how to knit sweaters so this would be a perfect opportunity to practice her skills and knit a sweater for me. This was also a good way to save money. As it was her first time, the sweater was vert simple and didn't have any patterns. She wanted to make a turtleneck but ran out of material so it ended up being a normal sweater. The sweater is very comfortable and great to wear in the winter! It fits very well and can also be worn with many other bits of clothing as it is monotone in colour and does not clash. Unfortunately, after two year of' wearing, it the sweater has split at the seams. I asked my mom if she could knit me another one but as it took her long the first time she said no. Even though there are sweaters in shops that are well-designed and more beautiful than the old one, they don't give me the feeling the one my Mother knitted me did. Every time I was homesick and wore the sweater It felt like that my Mother was with me and it reminded me of her.Want to progress faster?
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