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Childhood memories My childhood is nice celebrates. With flying the kites in the afternoon, the noon-summers without sleep to go to pick fruits together. Trips visiting grandparents by bicycle, etc. Beside sad celebrates influence on me. I remember as when I studied grade seventh. My family was very poor, we didn’t have enough money to pay anything in life. Especially, my first brother needed much money to study at the University in HCM, so my parents left our hometown to come to work a big city. That is Ho Chi Minh City. And I must live with my second brother. Our life lacked everything, no enough money to buy the books, buy food, pay electronic etc. Because my parents just sent about 500VND for us per month. We knew their try to work to improve life better than before. Sometimes, I cried because I miss and love them. After two years my second brother also went to HCM to study. My life was getting worse when I lived alone. everything around me became to fear at night ghost, thief, etc. But then everything was fine when my first older brother graduated. He worked and helped my family improve in life. This story childhood leaves deep impression and lessons for me. About taking care of myself, or pass a fear and make me more mature. Help correct the story. Many thanks~

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Childhood memories

My early childhood was filled with  nice celebrations, such as, flying kites in the afternoon, skipping nap time on summer afternoons to go to pick fruits together, or taking trips to visit my grandparents by bicycle, etc. However, there were also some sad  childhood experiences which had a great amount of influence on me.


I remember when I was in  seventh grade my family was very poor, and we didn’t have enough money to pay for anything in life.  My oldest brother needed a lot of money to study at the University in HCM, so my parents left our hometown to go to work  in Ho Chi Minh City, one of the largest cities in my country. As a result,  I  had to live with my second oldest brother. Our life lacked everything; there was not enough money to buy books, food, or electronics, etc., because my parents only sent about 500VND for us per month. We knew, however, that they were trying to improve our lives. Sometimes, I cried because I missed and loved them. After two years my second oldest brother also went to HCM to study. My life got even worse because then I had to live alone and at night I became afraid of everything:  ghosts, thieves, etc.  However, when my oldest  brother graduated, things began to improve.  He worked and helped my family improve in life.
This childhood story left a deep impression on me by teaching me to take care of myself.

Help correct the story. Many thanks~

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