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"Decisions we make" Living in the modern world people think about material things more than anything else. They want to be happy buying fancy cars, huge flats, pretty dresses. But, after all, comes clear understanding that having all of these they're not happy at all. There is a saying in our language: like a bird in a golden cage. Choosing his way one should make a decision to live in wealth with no feelings at all or to live happily in poverty. But which is right? Is it ok coming from work seeing a stranger at home? Going to bed thinking "What's wrong with me? What am I doing here?" Constantly asking yourself "Am I happy? Is this my life?" Having a lot of money, unfortunately, you can't buy happiness, love, desire to be together. You either love somebody or not. But what is more important is that both of you should have such desire. When two people are together but only one lives the life of the other, devotes his life to that person, gives time and do everything in sake of him one day he will get tired because he didn't get anything in return. That moment he understands that the person he used to love became his disappointment. In this case, you can lose the one who was so in love with you and did everything for you. Don't make such mistakes. Be attentive to your nearest people. They deserve that!

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"Decisions we make"

Living in the modern world people think about material things more than anything else. They want to be happy buying fancy cars, huge flats, pretty dresses. But, eventually, comes the clear understanding that having all of these they're not happy at all.

There is a saying in our language: 'like a bird in a golden cage'*. Choosing one's way one should decide to be rich without feelings or poor but happy. But which is right? Is it ok coming from work seeing a stranger at home? Going to bed thinking "What's wrong with me? What am I doing here?" Constantly asking yourself "Am I happy? Is this my lot?"

Riches, unfortunately, can't buy happiness, love, or the desire to be together. You either love somebody or not. But what is more important is that this feeling be mutual. When two people are together but only one gives their life to the other, devotes their life to that person, gives time and does everything for their sake, one day they will get tired because they got nothing in return. Then they will understand that the person they once loved became their disappointment. In this case, you can lose the one who was so in love with you and did everything for you.

Don't make such mistakes. Be attentive to your beloved. They deserve it!

*'like a bird in a gilded cage' for the English expression.

Very well written!

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