Today I went to school.
Today I had a my college's score about the first semester. The score is not bad so I relieved now ;).
I changed my make up a little, it is very a little diference but my friends noticed it. That's my friend! :).
And I ate paella(It's a spanish food maybe) for dinner that my mother made. It was taste so good!
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Today, I went to school.
Today I received my college's scores for first semester. The results are not bad so now I am relieved ;).I changed my makeup a little, it is very slightly different but my friends still noticed it. That's my friends! :).
For dinner, I ate paella (It's a type Spanish food, maybe) that my mother made. It tasted so delicious!
¨Scores¨ is fine. ¨Grades¨ is the most common in America, but you will here scores in the UK. ¨Results¨ is probably the most general term. You can never start a sentence with ¨And¨ in English unless it is a stylistic choice, used in creative writing. ¨Good¨ is a very weak word in English for describing things, so we would use a stronger word such as ¨delicious¨ Make sure to keep in mind where you use plurals, as the use has to remain consistent when you refer back to them. Towards the end, it sounds better to have ¨For dinner¨ start the sentence and then continue on about what you ate. Well done.
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Today, I went to school.
Today I had a my college's score about results for the first semester. The score result is not bad so I am relieved now ;).I changed my make up a little, it there is very a little difference but my friends noticed it. That's my friend! :).
And I ate paella(It's a type of Spanish food, maybe) for dinner that my mother made. It was tasted so good!
I'm not so sure but I think in most english speaking countries, we don't call our school semester results as 'score'. So I think just using result is better. Anyway, now I want Paella too
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