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Looking for corrections - Amazon Forest Amazon Forest The Amazon forest is the largest rainforest in the world considered as the lung of Earth. A huge culture and biological diversity is founded there, being that many species have not been discovered yet. The Amazon has a great importance to control local and regional climate, also its diversity has potential value to medicine. Despite the importance of the Amazon rainforest, recently the Brazilian President Michel Temer open a massive area to mining. This area called RENCA and its size is larger than Denmark. The mining operations normally cause several damages, like desforestation and the mercury pollution in the rivers. Moreover, there are natives people in the Renca, whom surely would be affect by the mining operations. Brazilians and international community has been concerned about it. A lot of criticisms and movements were made on social media by famous figures against the settlement of government. Due the repercussion, Brazilian court has blocked the liberation of Renca to mining, but this is not a definitive suspension yet. Thus, due this situation and other proposes harmful to Amazon forest running in the Brazilian Congress, it is important that citizens be alert. The Amazon is highly important for the rain distribution in Brazil. We can already see the results of damages caused, so instead of desforestation, the Amazon forest needs to be reforest, and we cannot close our eyes for that.

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1) The Amazon rainforest, considered "the lung of Earth", is the largest rainforest in the world

2) The Amazon rainforest is the largest rainforest in the world and it is considered "the lung of Earth"

A huge cultural and biological diversity is found there, especially given that many species have not been discovered yet. The Amazon has a great importance in controlling local and regional climate, also its diversity has potential value to medicine.

Despite the importance of the Amazon rainforest, recently Brazilian President Michel Temer opened a massive area to mining. This area is called RENCA and its size is larger than Denmark.

Mining operations normally cause several damages, like desforestation and the mercury pollution in the rivers. Moreover, there are native people / natives in the Renca, whom surely would be affected by the mining operations. 

Brazilians and international community have been concerned about it. A lot of criticisms and movements were made on social media by famous figures against the settlement of government. Due to the potential repercussions, the Brazilian court has blocked the liberation of Renca to mining, but this is not a definitive suspension yet.

Thus, due to this situation and other proposes harmful to Amazon forest running in the Brazilian Congress, it is important that citizens be alert. The Amazon is highly important for the rain distribution in Brazil. We can already see the results of damages caused, so instead of desforestation, the Amazon forest needs to be reforested, and we cannot close our eyes to that.


"Founded" means that a city, university, or an organization was created by a leader.  For example, "The original congress of the new country was founded by several political leaders during the war of independence."  Or, "The Western powers founded NATO to counter Soviet Communism after World War Two."

Your post is very good, with very few mistakes.  Your written English is very good.  Keep up the great work.  All of your entries so far seem to be very science and environmental policy based in nature.  Are you writing this for a college class as a project, or for a ecological conservation website / organization?

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Looking for corrections - Amazon Forest

The Amazon Forest.

The Amazon forest is the largest rainforest in the world, and it is also considered to be as  the "Lung of the Earth". A huge cultural and biological diversity are found there, with being that many species of plants and animals have not been discovered yet to be discovered. The Amazon basin has a very important role to play in the protection of a great importance to control local and regional climate. Also, its rich diversity of plant life has great potential value in the field of  medicine.

Despite the importance of the Amazon rainforest, recently the Brazilian President Michel Temer  still opened up a massive area in the region to mining. This area, which is  called RENCA,  and its size is larger than Denmark.

As we all know well enough, The mining operations will normally cause various ecological several damages, such as  deforestation and the mercury river pollution in the rivers. Moreover, there are many natives people living in the  RENCA , many of  who whom will surely would be affected  by the mining operations.

Many Brazilians as well as those from the international community have been concerned about this development/it. A lot of criticisms are voiced and movements many campaigns to raise awareness have been undertaken by famous personalities  were made on the social media by famous figures against these mining operations. the settlement of government. Due the great resentment, repercussion, the Brazilian court has suspended the plan to open up the land to blocked the liberation of Renca to mining, but this victory may not be definitive is not a , as the definitive suspension is not permanent as yet.  

Thus, due With this recent development situation and with the many other proposals of development in the Amazon forest-- all of which are damaging to the area -- that are now been debated proposes harmful to Amazon forest running in the Brazilian Congress, it is important for us to be aware of the events. that citizens be alert. The Amazon has a  very highly important role to play in  for the rainfall distribution in Brazil. We can already see the results of the damages that have been caused, so rather than encouraging deforestation in the area, we should protect and conserve the Amazon forest instead .needs to be reforest, and We cannot close our eyes to what is happening.  for that.

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