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La fase lunare 19 La scorsa notte non avevo potuto dormire fino all'alba. Durante quella notte, stavo ascoltando il cinguettio degli insetti, e avevo sentito la bella brezza fresca. Mentre ero illuminato dalla luna fase19, ho chiuso gli occhi e ho concentrato la mia attenzione sul suono per raccontare un insetto da un altro. <The sentences below is an English version> Last night, I had not be able to sleep till dawn. During that night, I had been listening to the chirping of insects, and had been feeling the nice cool breeze . While I had been lit by the moon phase 19, I closed my eyes and focused my attention on the sound to tell one insect from another.

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La fase lunare 19

La scorsa notte non ho potuto dormire fino all'alba.
Durante la notte, ho ascoltato* il verso/rumore** degli insetti, e ho sentito la bella brezza fresca.
Mentre ero illuminata dalla luna fase 19, ho chiuso gli occhi e ho concentrato la mia attenzione sul suono per distinguere un insetto dall'altro. 



Last night, I had not be able to sleep till dawn.
During that night, I had been listening to the chirping of insects, and had been feeling the nice cool breeze .
While I had been lit by the moon phase 19, I closed my eyes and focused my attention on the sound to tell one insect from another.


*"stavo ascoltando" requires to be followed by "quando" . "Stavo ascoltando il rumore degli insetti quando una farfalla si è posata su di me"

** "cinguettio" is only for birds


Bene! Purtroppo non puoi fare una traduzione letterale. Ti consiglio di studiare meglio i tempi verbali ;) 

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La fase lunare 19

La scorsa notte non ho potuto (non riuscivo ad addormentarmi) dormire fino all'alba.
Durante quella notte, stavo ascoltando il cinguettio degli insetti, e avevo sentito la bella brezza fresca.
Mentre ero illuminato dalla luna fase19, ho chiuso gli occhi e ho concentrato la mia attenzione sul suono per riconoscere un insetto da un altro.




Last night, I had not be able to sleep till dawn.
During that night, I had been listening to the chirping of insects, and had been feeling the nice cool breeze .
While I had been lit by the moon phase 19, I closed my eyes and focused my attention on the sound to tell one insect from another.
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Hello Rick, Thank you for the helpful comment. I understand tnat the moon is called "waxing gibbous" in English. 月齢19の月は英語で「waxing gibbous」と呼ぶのですね。 Some Japanese people may call that moon "fishimachi-zuki"(臥し待ち月). あの月を「臥し待ち月」と呼ぶ日本人もいます。 The waxing gibbous appears late hours which is at about 21:30, so we would waite it while laying ourselves. 臥し待ち月は、夜更け、だいたい9時30分頃にようやく現れます。だからその月を待つには横になって待ちます。 That name is an elegant traditional name of moon. これは古風で優雅な呼称です。 Japanese people loves moon-viewing, so there is many words about the moon in Japanese. 日本人は観月が好きなので、日本語には月にまつわる言葉がたくさんあります。
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Rick, also in the Italian language there is the expression: "Gibbosa crescente" but, as you say, it is used generally only by astronomers.
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I didn't know what this phase of the moon is called in English, from searching the net, it seems to be called "waxing gibbous", but I have never heard anyone say that. Probably only astronomers use that word!

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