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The Seminar Camp in Miyagi The Seminar Camp in Miyagi I went to Miyagi from September 7th to 9th for the seminar camp. I visited Sendai and Ishinomaki, Onagawa. I learn a lot of important things at there. It was a precious experience for me. Especially, I want to write a thing of my impression. I visited many places in Miyagi. I remember the most of all is Ishinomaki in second day and final day, because I enjoyed the beautiful scenery, and local dish at there. I ate sliced raw ascidian for the first time. It was delicious. However, not only enjoyed them. I actually learn local people’s thoughts, and the necessity of disaster preparedness. I climbed the mountain which used for evacuate then. It was hard for me to climb it. However, elementary school student actually climbed it in heavy snow. They must be scary. Especially, the bereaved, disaster victim’s speech moved me. They told us people should make each day count. Also, they told us people need to understand landform of they live. In conclusion, I learned a lot of things in the seminar camp. I actually look, and hear them. It can deepen my understanding of disaster area. Also, I can understand the history, and culture in there. Therefore, I want to make use of this experience to study in the class. Also, I want to appreciate a common day like today. I want to visit here again. I am sorry for my poor English, please correct these sentences.

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The Seminar Camp in Miyagi

The Seminar Camp in Miyagi
I went to Miyagi from September 7th to the 9th for the a seminar camp. I visited Sendai and Ishinomaki, Onagawa. I learned a lot of important things at there. It was a precious experience for me. Especially So much that, I wanted to write a thing of my impressions.
I visited many places in Miyagi. The best part was I remember the most of all is Ishinomaki on the second day and the final day, because I enjoyed the beautiful scenery, and ate local dishes at there. I ate sliced raw ascidian for the first time. It was delicious. However, not only enjoyed them those places. I actually learned the local people’s thoughts, and the necessity of disaster preparedness. I climbed the mountain which is used for evacuations then. It was hard for me to climb it. However, elementary school student actually climb it in heavy snow. They must have been be scared. The disaster victim's stories, especially the bereaved, disaster victim’s speech moved me. They told us people should make each day count. Also, they told us people need to understand landform the topography of where they live.
In conclusion, I learned a lot of things in the seminar camp. I actually look saw, and heard them. It can deepened my understanding of disaster areas. Also, I can was able to understand the history, and culture in there. Therefore, I want to make use of this experience to study in the class. Also, I want to appreciate a common normal day like today. I want to visit here again.


I am sorry for my poor English, please correct these sentences.

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