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Travelling by car I like travelling by car very much! It is very interesting, because you can see many places in a short time, you can stop when you like and where you like. There's no need to hurry. You have plenty of time. Of course, on the other hand, there are also some disadvantages: First of all the petrol is extremely expensive. It might cost serious money to get from one city to another. Besides, it is very difficult to find a place to park in a city. But nevertheless I really like to travel by car.

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Travelling by car

I like travelling by car very much! It is very interesting because you can see many places in a short time, and you can stop when you like and where you like. There's no need to hurry. You have plenty of time.
( Without the conjunction "and", the placement of the comma would join 2 independent sentences, which is wrong ( comma slice)

Or you could use the semi-colon to give a longer pause to join to related sentences. > because you can see many places in a short time;  you can stop ...... Or you can use a full stop and start the next sentence.

No comma after "interesting" because the reasons are clear.


Of course, on the other hand, there are also some disadvantages. ( No colon here unless you are introducing a list one by one)
First of all, the petrol is extremely expensive.
It might cost some serious money to get from one city to another.
Besides, it is very difficult to find a place to park in a city.
But nevertheless I really like to travel by car.

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Thanks guys! How about this: You can go where you want and when you want, you can make a stop anywhere and anytime, take some pictures or simply enjoy the beautiful scenery.
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I see no mistakes – great work!
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In my country, the cars is not popular. However, motorbike appear everywhere. Many people like backpacking by car. It is dangerous when we went around moutains but is very interested
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Nice job! And I agree, travelling by car is great :D

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