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It is important to know about events happening around the world. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Life is challenging. A prevalent topic which is undergoing debate currently is whether is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it have little relation with your daily life. I completely agree with this opinion because modern people need to broaden their horizon and they should make connections with their world. The bases of my view are personal and worldwide. Form a personal perspective, when students study in school, they need to study many histories around the world, even if it will not affect our life. This is because we can open other view and acquire many background knowledge form history. Similarly, when people watch news on TV they also catch much information happening in various countries. Through such background knowledge and information people become stronger, wisdom, and more creative. In worldwide viewpoint, people should make connections with our world. Each person belongs to diverse social groups and play various social role. We need to get the connection by the news which happening around our life. In addition, each of us has responsibility to concern events happening around the world, since it will change our opinions and idea in life. Thus, we ought to keep connect with society by several kinds of events happening around the world. In conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I completely agree that citizen should know events happening in the world because it plays a huge core on us. By following the news during the world, people can broaden their horizon and get connection with earth.

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It is important to know about events happening around the world.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.

Life is challenging. A prevalent topic which is currently undergoing debate is whether it's important to know about events happening around the world, even if they have little relevance to your daily life. I think it is important because people need to broaden their horizons and they should make connections with the world. The reasons behind my view are personal and worldwide.

Form a personal perspective, when students study in school, they need to study world history, even if it will not affect their lives. This is because we can broaden our horizons from history. Similarly, when people watch news on TV they also learn a lot about events happening in various countries.
Through learning people become stronger, wiser, and more creative.

In worldwide viewpoint, people should make connections with our world. Each person belongs to diverse social groups and plays various social roles. We need to be connected by the news of what is happening around our lives. In addition, each of us has a responsibility to concern events happening around the world, since it will change our opinions and idea in life. Thus, we ought to stay connected with society through keeping up with current events.

In conclusion, I completely agree that responsible citizens should be knowledgeable of current events because they have a big impact on us. By following the world news, people can broaden their horizons and get better connected with society.
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Thank you Alan
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