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this is a essay I have written, can somebody correct for me please? How to become an organized person To be organized means you have strong abilities in three aspects. First, you can keep everything tidy. Second, to arrange or order things so that they can be found or used easily and quickly. Last, always keep cool and calm in front of tons of work everyday. As far as I am concern I consider myself an organized person. I always arrange or order things so that I can keep them tidy. But sometimes I’m not organized very well . When I first came to U.S. I was almost in chaos because I didn’t familiar with everything in daily life. But I got used everything as the times passed. Another less organized time is when I just took part in a job after graduating from University. Working for me is a totally new thing. At that time, I was given multi-work that including different task, I was only familiar with some of them, so I felt puzzle in front of so many unfamiliar tasks. Now, everyone confront overload information everyday. How to keep organize is a very important strategy to live a easier life. So I hope I will become a more organized person than I had before after learning some tips about how to be a organized person. Here’s what I decide to do. Use a schedule to list everything I suppose to do. Set alarms so I don’t need to think about what’s next. Always remind myself for “good enough” on the little decisions so I can focus on important one. Regularly capture, triage and prioritize new items. Overall I hope these tips are useful for me to be a more organized person.

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this is an essay I have written, can somebody correct for me please?

How to become an organized person
To be organized means you have strong abilities in three aspects. First, you can keep everything tidy. Second, to arrange or order things so that they can be found or used easily and quickly. Last, always keep cool and calm when faced with tons of work everyday. As far as I am concerned, I consider myself an organized person. I always arrange or order things so that I can keep them tidy, but sometimes I’m not very well organized. When I first came to the U.S. I was almost in chaos because I never became familiar with everything in my daily life, but I got used everything as the time passed. Another less organized time is when I took part in a job after graduating from university. For me, working is a totally new thing. At that time, I was given multi-work that includes different tasks. I was only familiar with some of them, so I felt puzzled when faced with so many unfamiliar tasks. Now, everyone confronts loads of information everyday. Keeping yourself organized is essential to live an easier life. So I hope I will become a more organized person than I had before after learning some tips about how to be a organized person. Here’s what I decided to do. Use a schedule to list everything I'm supposed to do. Set alarms so I don’t need to think about what’s next. Always remind myself that the little decisions are “good enough” so I can focus on important ones. Regularly sort out and prioritize new items. Overall I hope these tips are useful for me to be a more organized person.

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