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This is the first my feeling about idyllic life in the countryside. I was born and grown in the small province of Vietnam. My house is near the sea. It isn’t beautiful but it always brings comfort and happiness to us.
Roosters Crowing in the Morning begins the new day. The dawn of sun gradually appeared from east of the sea. It seems people waked up to prepare for a new day. Each person a job, the farmers go out to the fields, the workers go to factories, and the students go to school etc.
You will see something special when standing on the beach. You will see the fishermen start dropping the nets, some boats are floating on the sea, and the waves pat gently by winds. It looks like a beautiful picture of the morning.
The life here didn’t like the life of city, everything takes place very simply and slowly. The small market just has some traders but they are very happy and friendly. The foods here are very fresh and cheap.
I love idyllic life here. If you come here, you love it same me.
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First I will talk about my feelings on idyllic life in the countryside. I was born and grew up in the small province of Vietnam. My house was near the sea. It wasn't beautiful but it always brought comfort and happiness to us.Roosters crowed in the Morning to begin the new day. The dawn of sun gradually appeared from east of the sea. It seemed people woke up to prepare for a new day. Each person a job: the farmers go out to the fields, the workers go to factories, and the students go to school etc.
You will see something special when standing on the beach. You will see the fishermen start dropping the nets, some boats are floating on the sea, and the wind gently patting the waves. It looks like a beautiful picture of the morning.
Life here isn't like the life of a city. Everything takes place very simply and slowly. The small market just has some traders but they are very happy and friendly. The foods here are very fresh and cheap.
I love idyllic life here. If you come here, you would (or will) love it same me.
Very good :) Just be careful with past and present tenses.
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