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Hello, I'm Yumi.
I'm engineer working in agricultual machinery maker.
I have a lot of hobby.
My hobby is anime, painting, cooking... and more.
So I go to cooking school in holiday.
Recently, I also start to participate in karate and jodo school.
Jodo is one of Japanese tradditional sports using wooden stick and wooden sword.
I look forward to holiday every week.
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Hello, I'm Yumi.
I'm an engineer working as an agricultural machinery maker.
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I'm an engineer working for an agricultural machinery manufacturer.
I have a lot of hobbies .
My hobbies are anime, painting, cooking... and more.
So I am going to cooking school during my days off.
Recently, I have also started at a karate and judo school.
Judo is one of the Japanese traditional sports using wooden sticks and wooden swords.
I look forward to my days off every week.
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introduction
Hello, I'm Yumi.I'm an engineer working in agricultural machinery maker.
I have a lot of hobbies .
My hobbies are anime, painting, cooking... and more.
So I go to cooking school in holiday.
Recently, I have also started to participate in karate and judo school. "Recently" : you started participating in the past and you remains to do that .. so you'd better to use present perfect tense "has/have + p.p"
Judo is one of Japanese traditional sports using wooden stick and wooden sword.
I look forward to holiday every week.
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Thank you for your identification!
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I think you should change hobby ---> hobbies
My hobby is ---->my hobbies are
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