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My Student. Her big problem was that she didn't do her best. She did basic things as a student but she wasn't hardworking. One day, she submitted a report with dirt on and bad handwriting and many grammatical mistakes. After correcting them, I got mad. Calling her, I explained how lazy she was. I yelled at her " It's meaning less to submit this quality of reports. Besides, it is insult to me." Then, tears run down her cheek. She looked sulky. Two days later, she came to me and apologized and she said she would study harder. But her efforts wasn't enough. Failing a class, she had to take a course again. When she took the course second time, she made efforts. Doing her homework carefully, double checking assignments, asking many good questions, she became a enthusiastic student. She was so friendly and kind that she had many friends. Many boys liked her but she was too beautiful for them to ask her out. After finishing the course, she joined a big company. But she wasn't satisfied with it because she couldn't speak English and it was a boring job.

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My Student.

Her big problem was that she didn't do try her best. She did the basic things as a student, but she wasn't hardworking. One day, she submitted a report with dirt on it, and bad handwriting, and many grammatical mistakes errors. After correcting them, I got mad. I called her over, and I explained how lazy she was. I yelled at her, and said  "It's meaning less to submit this quality of reports. Besides, it is an insult to me." Then, tears ran down her cheeks. She looked like she was sulking. Two days later, she came to me, and apologized, and she said she would study harder. But her efforts weren't enough. Failing a the class, she had to take a the course again. When she took the course the second time, she made an effort. Doing her homework carefully, double checking assignments, and asking many good questions, she became a enthusiastic student.
She was so friendly and kind that she had many friends. Many boys liked her, but she was too beautiful for them to ask her out. After finishing the course, she joined a big company. But she wasn't satisfied with it, because she couldn't speak English and it was a boring job.
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Basic things is like attending classes, doing her homework and answering questions. I had to make this short so I write "did basic things as a student" Dose it make sense?
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