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Peach I ate a peach, which my family bought at a supermarket, the other day. It was very tough like persimmon. The taste was not good, either. Probably the peach was not ripe enough to eat yet. Farmers seem to ship the fruits before the fruits become ripe completely so as not to become too ripe when the time they are in the supermarket. My family seems to happen to buy bad one unfortunately. I ate an another peach for my today's breakfast though, it was so good.

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Peach

I ate a peach, which my family bought at a supermarket, the other day. It was very tough like persimmon. The taste was not good, either. Probably the peach was not ripe enough to eat yet.
Farmers seem to ship the fruits before the fruits become ripe completely so as not to become too ripe when the time they are in the supermarket. My family seems to happen to buy a bad one, unfortunately.
I ate an another peach for my today's breakfast though, it was so good.

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Good text! Corrected only a few things I noticed. 

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